Since you wanted feedback throughout I would like to say that the video, music and the neat picture for the note were cool. It would be nice if you could find a way to make the music loop and if there was some way to watch the video without having to navigate to another page. This is not a comment on your abilities, I do not think the site will allow you to do anything but links to the videos. On another note, completely unrelated to the multimedia stuff, your descriptive skills are quite good. I like how you laid things out in your post. You gave it full texture instead of making the mistake that many do in the giving texture only to what is important and robbing the player of the chance to really think through and sometimes poke around the scene and find the important stuff. It is a little extra work, but has great value. To sum up you are doing well so far. Keep up the good job.