Not truly the right location I am afraid, I would also be sure when getting something like this hosted to ensure its not using trademarks. It was certainly an interesting read in terms of detail (though it seems to be a Fallout 3 rpg, which as the old grognard I am, while a fun game really had piss poor fit and theme for Fallout..New Vegas was a much better fit to the feel of 1 and 2).
As an aside though, I am moving your thread to the correct forum. Hopefully it gets you the feedback you are looking for.
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