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LAST CRUSADER
03-09-2009, 05:47 PM
HEY GUYS !
CHECK IT OUT ! I MADE MY OWN SUPERHERO GAME. http://supercrusaders.blogspot.com/ TAKE A LOOK AND POST YOURE QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, AND CRITICISMS HERE. I'LL PROBABLY USE THE FEEDBACK TO START AN FAQ PAGE ON MY SITE.

Soft Serve
03-16-2009, 01:12 PM
Why is there a picture of Jesus?

Lucian-Sunaka
03-16-2009, 01:57 PM
Lol, it's because he decided to use the site for dual purposes. It's not just a game site, it also has that side to it. Honestly I like that fact, the more people we can show people that gaming and faith in something people consider a normal religion are compatible the better. (Yes, I come from a family of people who think D&D = Satanism lol, that's a philosphy that needs to end.)

Sneaksta
03-16-2009, 03:32 PM
Oh come on! no more sacrificing chickens in the graveyard, at midnight, over a ceremonial fire, with incantations of ....MMmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmmmm...

LoL

Gotta love the close-minded-scared-of-everything-that-is-not-normal-to-them-(aka their parents or churches disaprove, by calling it satanic, or witchcraft, effectively brainwashing the masses....hmm, well, religion has been doing this for thousands of years.....) Take that fer yer 10% tithe.

( before i get jumped on, I am a christian, just a hater of churches and the several denominations... i think religion is the biggest rampant scam in the world......Faith is what is important!, not wether yer a catholic, or blah blah blah.......)

LAST CRUSADER
03-16-2009, 05:59 PM
Accually the site has just one purpose and that's to promote the books I've written, later I'm going to add a page for the comic books I've made, but they haven't all been scanned into the computer yet so it might take a few months. I probably wont be trying to sell the comic books.
Anyway this web site is about pen and paper games and this thread is about my game, not my website so please give me some feedback about the game.

P.S. I normally would love to jump into the religion debate, as you can see, from my name and my book, it's kinda my thing, but not here, please. if you really want my view on that subject my e-mail adress is all over my website.

nijineko
03-17-2009, 01:10 AM
downloaded, but not yet reviewed. =)

LAST CRUSADER
03-17-2009, 05:42 AM
Cool, lookin forward to it

Moritz
03-17-2009, 09:05 AM
LC
Were you inspired by:
http://www.churchofreality.org/images/super-best-friends.jpg

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Super_Best_Friends

Soft Serve
03-17-2009, 01:26 PM
WOW I can't stop laughing...


Stan is there and just...

Wow...

LAST CRUSADER
03-17-2009, 04:18 PM
No never heard of that one
--- Merged from Double Post ---
I have very mixed feeling about south park, kind of like a guy who likes but hates porn

Moritz
03-26-2009, 10:07 AM
Jesus Saves! Everyone else take 20 damage.

http://www.leisuresuit.net/lsm_images/ultrachrist_poster.jpg

http://www.leisuresuit.net/ultrachrist/

ronpyatt
03-26-2009, 11:40 AM
I find a couple things I liked and some difficulties with the system.

I found these items unappealing:

You are stuck with Limits once chosen
Weaknesses are forever
Powers can use only 1 bonus at a time (example, Grab + Damage + Bane Undead is not allowed)
Every lvl HTH increases, which seems very D&Dish and does not reflect every super, but maybe is fine in your genre
Arch enemy missions are solo, making team sessions not so fun, and 5th level the longest level of your gaming career
Limited to carrying 3 sacramentals, which might be for game balance, but doesn't fit with some character concepts
Bonuses appear to be fixed in a way that limits the scope of powers to very specific capabilities, making the creation your many concepts difficult
Immortal PC vampires, by that power's description, are not possible
NPC powers unavailable to PC (explained away by balance considerations), which also reduces the possibilities for creating some super concepts (example, voodoo)


I liked:

Every level adds your Lvl to damage
Arch enemies required every 5 levels


I found these items odd:

Completing arch enemy vague, undetermined, contradictory (It is unclear when the enemy can't be defeated and must be defeated.)
Kevlar only against bullets (modern Kevlar now offers protection against blades, spikes, high temperatures, and bullets)
Energy attack is separate from electricity, psi, fire, and radiation, which are forms of energy, and Energy is also a stat
Although limits and weaknesses are binding, they're not when you want to revamp your character (maybe it's the way it was presented, not sure)


Now that I've read it, my overall impressions are that the system is too limiting, absolutes tend to get in the way of creativity, and that I don't care for the narrowly focused theme of this game, as it appears to take away from what a superhero might be.

Good luck.

Moritz
03-27-2009, 09:59 AM
And then there's always:

http://www.marvelfamily.com/Images/WhosWho/Son-O%27-God.gif

http://www.marvelfamily.com/WhosWho/whoswho.aspx?castID=1883 (http://www.marvelfamily.com/WhosWho/whoswho.aspx?castID=1883)

LAST CRUSADER
03-27-2009, 05:16 PM
:cool:you're stuck with limits because if you weren't they wouldn't be limits. this doesn't mean you can't buy them off, just that while you have them the power can't be used without them.

:cool:weaknesses are forever because they are in the comics. superman won't stop being vulnerable to kryptonite and magic.

:cool:powers can only use one bonus at a time partly for game ballance and partly to encourage having a varriety of abilities instead of building one godawful attack that becomes the only one you ever use.

:rolleyes:increases in hth every level are something where i actually sympathize with you. personally if i were making the game just for myself i wouldn't have levels at all, but i made to publish so i had to concider what other people like. most people wouldn't want to play the game without levels (trust me i've asked around) and if i'm going to have levels they have to be useful for something. you liked damage going up evey level. well, if damage went up and hth didn't the game would quickly become unballanced.

:confused:i don't see how making certain missions solo makes team missions less fun. please explain

:cool:you can get around the limit to the number of sacrimentals by taking the power "tool kit" actually i should have said (and i'll fix it) that you can't carry more than 3 equipement items of any kind.

:confused:the next complaint i didn't understand. perhaps an example would make it clearer

:cool:immortal characters can't become vampires but if your character is a vampire this will be the source of his immortality. he doesn't need to become a vampire and vampires can't become zombies or werewolves. a non immortal character can become a vampire by being bitten.

:mad:super heroes niether use nor need voodoo. only villains use this power. even brother voodoo doesn't beat villains by making voodoo dolls and sitting quietly at home sticking pins in them

:cool:the reference to enimies that can't be defeated clearly states that you have to be satisfied with foiling his plot

:cool:for modern kevlar take the resistance power not standard kevlar as equipment

:cool:i thought the explanation of what is meant by "energy" made it clear

:Dyou're right remaking the character is a way around the rule saying weaknesses are permanent. but the g.m. has to aprove character revamps and should prevent abuses. this loophole was left on purpose because if your character goes through a dramatic transformation perhaps his weeknesses can go away. proffesor x eventually got up and walked.

:cool:as for the theme of the game being narrow, it will be expanded with later additions but i had to start somewhere. if you want a universal system, super heroes are the best place to look because they are the most versitile genre there is. if you can make super heroes work. there's nothing you can't do. while systems like gurps started out with the fantasy and sci fi genres and when they got round to tacking super heroes on. it just didn't work. (gurps never worked all that well mind you but gurps supers is the supliment that has the most obvious problems)

:o:o:ofinally i want to thank you for your critique all feedback is welcome and as i said these issues will be adressed in an upcomming faq page on my website. in addition keep an eye out for some modificatiuons to the rules that i'm working on. they will be making the game a bit more user friendly and fixing some game ballance issues that you didn't adress probably because they only become apparant when you accually play the game.

by the way, i've never used smilies before

Soft Serve
03-27-2009, 10:41 PM
by the way, i've never used smilies before



Well your a fast learner. :lol:

LAST CRUSADER
07-10-2009, 06:45 PM
There is a new edition of the game up now which adresses some of the concerns expressed above as well as adding a host of new material to the Game. It's called the Justice Edition and promisses to be the last change in the game for some years to come. In addition, there is now an Lower Case version available for people who find all caps difficult to read. there is a book of creatures and characters, and a lot of pogs for use with Game Table. check it out and let me know what you think.

LAST CRUSADER
10-08-2009, 06:33 AM
Well, it turns out that instead of creating an faq page I've produced a New Edition of Super Crusaders which is much clearer and better thought out. It's called the Paladin Edition,and now all 3 books have my own favorite P.C. (The Mighty Paladin) on thier covers.
Unfortunately all 3 books are a bit longer but it it still uses the same basic mechanics. It also has more and better artwork and It's still free for now. check it out and see what you think.
Reviews frankly have ranged from "Just aweful" to "the best game since D.C. Heroes". I didn't make either of those up. But both are kind of vague so gimme some useful comments and questions. Please.

guardian1968
10-11-2009, 11:50 AM
With what I've looked over thus far, I find it intriguing. What I find intriguing is the angle you've taken to approach the superhero rpg. It is remniscent of TRUTH & JUSTICE, CLASSIC MARVEL RPG, VILLAINS & VIGILANTES and an old game I once owned called HEROES & HEROINES.

When I look it over in detail, I will give you a more detailed critique.

I will say, however, that your Jesus page seems Catholic-centric. Normal Christians don't appreciate the elevation of Mary to the Mother Goddess role to ease with converts...erum...I mean to be as important as Jesus and such.

LAST CRUSADER
10-12-2009, 05:24 AM
I will say, however, that your Jesus page seems Catholic-centric. Normal Christians don't appreciate the elevation of Mary to the Mother Goddess role to ease with converts...erum...I mean to be as important as Jesus and such.

You confused me at first. I thought you meant the page in book 3 of the game that talks about religion in a superhero world. Which doesn't mention Mary at all. It took me a moment to realize you were talking about My other book.
I guess the best response is: 2/3 of all Christians are Catholic so we're the "Normal" ones. :) Also we don't concider Mary to be as important as Jesus, after all, she may be God's greatest creation, but Jesus is God the Son.

Anyway hope the Game stands up to closer examination, and it's unique features stand out so that it can escape from comparisons. :cool:

guardian1968
10-13-2009, 10:39 AM
You confused me at first. I thought you meant the page in book 3 of the game that talks about religion in a superhero world. Which doesn't mention Mary at all. It took me a moment to realize you were talking about My other book.
I guess the best response is: 2/3 of all Christians are Catholic so we're the "Normal" ones. :) Also we don't concider Mary to be as important as Jesus, after all, she may be God's greatest creation, but Jesus is God the Son.

Anyway hope the Game stands up to closer examination, and it's unique features stand out so that it can escape from comparisons. :cool:



Oh, I understand about Mary...I was raised Catholic and am currently a Buddhist by choice. Historically, however, don't forget the Church used Mary to convert certain pagans by closely resembling a mother goddess figure. And, to any outsider the elevation is confusing particularly when you go into detail about the Visitations and the Miraculous Medal and the importance of Mary (not Jesus) appearing to several children to become a true mother goddess figure (at least in an academic sense) for Mankind at large.

For religions, for some reason other than to be inclusive in some way, that word "we" often gets to me. Not in a bad sense, it just makes me chuckle.

I see God, or however you want to label the Creator in a way you can refer to him/her/it as the revelation of "truth". An example of what I mean by this is to take a multi-facted crystl and hold it up to the sunshine. What happens? Is there one, true beam of light that shines from the crystal? No. There are a multitude of rays that emanate from the crystal. This is what I perceive to be "truth" from "God". Mankind is notoriously self-deceptive and we chose to listen to the serpent in the creation story. Choice. Belief is like opinions as everyone sits on one.

I am personally impressed in the offerings of your (currently) free website. To have the contrast of religion and gaming that has often been related to the Devil's handiwork is genius, whether you consciously chose to do so or not.

In any case, I certainly look forward to going in depth with your game this week. I'm sure it is wonderful...it certainly utilizes the elements I love from other games...and offers a fairly comprehensive random rolling creation option that reminds me very much of the way Classic Marvel used to do it. However, I will give you my critique (a fair one, no matter how I lean as I always find something good to say with anything) by the end of the week, sir.

LAST CRUSADER
10-26-2009, 10:28 PM
There is now an AUTO CHARACTER SHEET CREATOR available for SUPER CRUSADERS ! using drop box menues to fill out various fields including origin class powers, bonuses and limits, weeknesses etc... It's on the Game website so that everyone will have a chance to take in the glory of it.
It was not easy to create. Drop boxes can only be inserted into certain
types of files. Word, only alows 25 items on a menu so it was useless for my powers list. The online form creators that I tried would only allow one
object/line which made for a very long hard to use form, and HTML editors are so complicated that without someone to teach me it would probably take many months to figure one out.
I spent all day saturday downloading and trying one program after another to
see if it could do what I wanted and then deleting them when they didn't work.
I finally came across Open Office which worked great but the files cant be
opened in any other program so you have to get Open Office if you don't already have it. Fortunately it's free to download and theres a link to the downloade site on the game site.
It still isn't everything I wanted it to be. If anyone out there knows how to fix it so that selecting your class automatically sets your stats please let me know. Or, if it's really complicated, please do it for me and send me the finished file at leewalser@hotmail.com (http://games.groups.yahoo.com/group/supercrusaders/post?postID=mAjkAFumsGFFoPjIARQF2vk3P6uu-wx6WLQGN9SL6MQP_BwU6LmdYA-IiFIUJOA1Llm8-82nsjzRVpXA) . I'll put it up on the site, and let the world know what you did for me, so that millions of other people can spam you with requests for help. (don't worry,I wouldn't really post your e-mail adress)

guardian1968
10-27-2009, 11:52 AM
Anyway hope the Game stands up to closer examination, and it's unique features stand out so that it can escape from comparisons. :cool:


I enjoy your system. It has a simplicity I haven't felt in a game since my all-time fave, the Classic Marvel RPG (which, believe me, is high praise from me). It has a toolkit kind of feeling that I think would be recommended to those GMs who want a fast, quick system that could both provide and deliver for the sake of gaming purposes.

You pretty much thought out all you need for a basic game while leaving ample room for GMs to both add to and expand what is there for their own purposes. I feel this is always a plus, as I am bored to tears with systems that try to over-analyze everything, including what kind of fabric your character wears for his uniform underwear (is it caped, or is it Memorex...spend the points to make certain).

Character creation is a breeze. I created a Level-0 character named Mega-Man in about fifteen minutes (and that was only because I needed to look at where the information was listed - it will be even faster, now that I know where to look). He seems very cool to create other versions of him for other games (like, say, Marvel). Any game that helps me to create a character that would work well in another game system is always a cool game system to begin with. Kudos on that, whether you planned it that way or not.

For a basic game, it is worth the price of admission. Perhaps some thought is needed for complete well-roundedness (such as rules governing elder gamers, like myself, who might want to play a character with a proven track record [just how many more PUs would a character like that get? 50 more? 100? Would it depend upon how many years that character has been around? Would added PUs mean added Weaknesses that MUST be taken to compensate? You know, that sort of thing.]). The very fact that I got to that place in asking myself questions about the given rules and wanting to see more speaks volumes for your system.

All-in-all a VERY good start with VERY promising horizons. Good luck with this, and I hope to see just where you plan on taking your creation!

LAST CRUSADER
03-13-2010, 11:06 PM
The newest edition of SUPER CRUSADERS RPG is finally available. After months of waiting it can now be downloaded FREE !


SUPER CRUSADERS RPG.pdf (http://crusadergame.books.officelive.com/Documents/SUPER%20CRUSADERS%20%20RPG.pdf)

So what are the new features ?

IT'S ALL IN ONE BOOK and everything has been improved.
NEW CLASSES
NEW POWERS
NEW BONUSES
NEW LIMITS
NEW WEAKNESSES
NEW ORGANIZATION
ADITIONAL COMMENTARY
NEW ARTWORK
AN INDEX




STILLTHE SAME BASIC MECHANICS BUT NOW IT'S A WHOLE NEW GAME
GET IT WHILE ITS FREE ! IT WON'T BE FOREVER !


oh and don't forget to let me know what you think

LAST CRUSADER
03-24-2010, 09:38 PM
Super Crusaders RPG is now for sale at Drivethrough RPG YIPPY SKIPPY. Check it out, buy it, play it. rate it, write a review. :cool: Thank You All
http://rpg.drivethrustuff.com/index.php?filters=600_0_0_0&manufacturers_id=3185

magic-rhyme
03-24-2010, 09:47 PM
You desperately need a good editor.

LAST CRUSADER
03-25-2010, 05:28 AM
You desperately need a good editor.

Of course I know that. I tell you what, If it makes enough money I promise to hire an editor and put out a second edition but right now all I have is the spell checker built into JARTE and you can see just how well it works.

I know I have trouble with spelling. throughout my years of school I struggled with this. Not once did I ever pass a spelling test, and we had them every week. In high school I would turn in papers that would always get Bs and the teachers would explain that it could have been an A if not for the spelling. Some of them thought about taking 1 point off for each mispelled word but if they did it would mean an F before the end of the first page. When I first started typing, and added typos to misspelling, my work looked like a foreign language. So trust me when I say that I have been working on the problem, and I have gotten much better. But still, as soon as I can afford it I'm getting someone else to do it.

For now, may I please have comments on the GAME and how it works. was it fun to read and play ? Was it easy to use or were there parts that didn't work or weren't clear ? Did you like the pictures or were too many pictures distracting ? Please give me some feedback I can actually use.